Can't you leave in your world to be in mine?1
Can't we talk rather than making a statement?2
Can't we love rather than drift apart?3
Can't we feel what's in each others heart?4
Can't we be on the same page of the book?5
Can't we hear the same tune?6
Can't you give a little more to receive a lot in return?7
Can't you think about yourself and think of me?8
Can't you trust me as much as I trust you?9
Can't you hear me when I'm talking to you?10
Can't we know what love is if we are both too scared?11
Can't you give me the time in day when I want your time?12
Can't we work together if we both try?13
Can't you love me for who I am not what's you want me to be?14
Can't you open your heart when you have it locked?15
Can you love me?16
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Thought provoking vibrations of the soul!!
Thought provoking ... a mantle of querie well eloqueted
Heart felt vibrations of the soul Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors!!
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wow thats so effective. i love the reptetitive use of questions and the first word. Its gives a great impact and lots of power. great write
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I really love this a lot. I love poems/stories with questions because it leaves it open for any answer, if answer at all. This was written very well. Except I do not know what option it is and apparently you forgot a little thing in the author's comments to say you've read the rules...just making sure you do that okay? Thanks for entering and good luck!
Cassie
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