Let me tell you about a person so wonderful you won't know what hit you. 1
He has dark blonde hair that is a bit wild and amazing blue eyes.2
His lips are soft and I cannot get enough of those lips.3
When he is away all I do is think about him, wishing I was close to him. Hugging him, kissing him, holding his hand and talking to him are some of the best things in the world to do.4
I am obsessed by him and I cannot get enough. 5
When he is gone for too long, or when I start to think about the future, and how it could be a future without him, it hurts. It hurts so much. It hurts so much that my eyes tear up and sometimes I cry. It is like a thousand knives stabbing me multiple times, short quick stabs until I manage to think about something else. Until I manage to distract myself.6
It is not easy. 7
Without him I doubt I can live. I do not doubt my feelings for him. 8
And I hope and think that he knows how I feel. My feelings are hard to explain, but I do try and I think I've done okay. 9
The feelings I get when I am with him are very pleasant feelings. It is like a shiver that goes down my spine, it makes me want to be closer to him and never let him go. I feel protected and safe.10
Just lying next to him, speaking and joking. That is heaven. Small touches, a hand on my cheek, a hand through his hair. It is such a wonderful feeling. I feel like I am truly home. 11
I never want to lose those feelings, and I never wish to lose him. 12
He is my life, without him I am dead or perhaps a living dead.
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This is truly how I feel, so do not tell me that the content is bad. Spelling and such is very appreciated if you point out to me though, Thanks for taking the time to read this!
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very sweet. I know the feeling. There certainly is a lot to love than just the romantic feelings and you've covered it well, good job.
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Thank you
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I've been in love - and I know it hurts I think sometimes, when we love someone, we have to be even a bit numb to it, or else we get consumed by the pain and pleasure...
There was a part where your story made me wonder:
how it could be a future without him, it hurts. It hurts so much. It hurts so much that my eyes tear up and sometimes I cry.
The repetition got to me, particularly because when words are repeated, it's usually done to emphasize something. In this case, I just think it would be said better if "it hurts" was said once. But this is just my opinion.
Anyway, thanks for your entry. GOod luck with the contest
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Hiya.
Thanks for your comment. Yeah, I actually agree. "It hurts" three times might be a bit much
Thanks again ^^
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Whops. I just happened to click this, but I think it was a lovely little text, and it makes me so much more eager to go "home" to my girlfriend for Valentines day.
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I'm happy you happened to klick this ^^ Because your comment made me really happy. Isn't love wonderful?
Have a great day with ur girl
And thanks for the comment
//S
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This is a beautiful way of describing your love for someone. You get emotional writing it? I know I would. Your guy is one lucky guy. I love how you describe the little things he does, which well they may not seem alot to others, mean everything to you. Thats what it was like when I went out with my bf.
Lovely writing.
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Thank you!
You're comment means a lot!
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