Common Cliche

In all its common cliche,
I find the nessicty to say
I love you.1

I've searched through endless words,
Knowing they've all been heard.
If I could possibly write something new,
It would be a different way to say
I love you.2


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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    March 9
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    cute, short write.. and despite that its a romantic little piece- I can't say if I see the Shakespeare inspiration or not here. I guess you could say that maybe Shakespeare inspired you to write the romance and that's alright.

    nessicty= necessity

    overall, cute- good,sweet work.
    thanks for entering and good luck


  • Britty1995
    February 12
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    Um...a little short but really good. Make your things just a little longer. Good luck!