burn--oldtime 5

The dead bodies of the preists heard Nathaniel?s cries. The Earth had refused to suck in their filthy blood. They formed together into one body. The dead moon turned her solemn face from this un pure creation as it took it?s forum. Instead, she decided to shine her pale light upon the gnarled figure of Samuel?s baby brother. His blackened skin hardened into a stone like outer oval covering while his interior became a lucid silver fluid.1

When Samuel?s baby brother was finished transforming Seth took him in a blanket and dragged him back to Samuel. Seth did not see the ugly and un clean beast being formed in the darkness of the night. It bubbled and ripped the flesh until it became a dark purple fluid. There it sat skunking up the earth beneath it. The earth refused to absorb any of it?s disgusting being. The liquid boiled and crusted over. Layer by layer it formed it?s self.  When the dawn came it ran with it?s new made legs into the forest so as not to be scotched by the light of the sun.2

Seth Walked merrily around showing Samuel where he had found the onyx black egg that was now being kept in a hearth fire. ?Seth, did thou see what happened to the bodies of the preists I had slain t?other day??  Seth sniffed around. ?I know not sir.? A dark musky green cloud covered the light from the sun and made a rotten darkness fill the air around them. A tri-tone laugh escaped from the musk. A small tornado came to the ground but it did not blow anything around it.3

From the green tornado came the form of  a hideous creature. It had thin legs with horns protruding  from every inch of it. It?s body was hunched over and an ugly rotted green color. It had a large face that was horribly misshapen, a lopsided moth, no nose, and one  ugly small red eye. It spoke in a tri-tone voice. ?Evil Beast. I can destroy thee now.? Seth  gave Samuel his sword. He held it ready to attack.4

Author notes

i know i know i cut off just when it was getting good... but that's cuz i'm mean!

What did you think? Please comment!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

  • BloodStar7740
    October 15, 2003
    Edit | Reply
    ^-^ i finally got out of ur last chapter this ones really good but wats with the ooz thing? yea and how does the egg come into this all im confuzzled @-@a

  • SternBlinkin
    October 11, 2003
    Edit | Reply
    lol...i will say that your other ones i liked better, b/c it it didn't really have a clearn picture (for me) of what exactly was happening. I know the 3 prist are this monster, but what exactly happen to his brother and why? where did this egg thing come from? this onyxs egg in the flames where didit come from? i think you should of spend more time on this one. But i got the drift of things. And i thougth the beast of the 3 ran off int he woods. idk..
    *SternBlinkin *