Cicada Summer III: My favorite

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The rolling hills that seem to roll forever,2

layed with carpets of never ending bluegrass3

and they seem to run,4

run to the end of the world,5

and the end is greeted with blooming tobacco flowers6

taking the gift of life from the master creator7

and soaking in its rays8

I shouted "I love you!"9

and she repeated my words.10

These words made the rain go away,11

those words made my worries disappear12

her voice made 13

me 14

and 15

the ground beneath me 16

tremble17

& I felt my body move 18

with every sharp turn in the vehicle.19

My senses were temporarily dedicated 20

to her and her existence.21

For that moment 22

I had a reason23

For that one frame in time 24

I had a purpose25

and then I realized 26

I was real27

she was real, 28

and love is real29

in a world where nothing feels real30

Author notes

My first poem i ever let anyone besides other poets read, i wrote this about my girlfriend, she has inspired me the most to show people my poetry

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