Once apon a time in a far away land, there was a lantern that was filled with magical powers. Ghosty, the cat who gives everyone else missions, gave the lantern to Shadow to take to the village, but before he got there, he got ambushed! Someone had taken the lantern and kidnapped him. Ghosty then tells everybody about what happened. Bobo was reluctant to help cause him and Shadow weren't friends. The rest of the characters are as follows: Missy, she's Bobo's little sister, Allie, she's the youngest cat, and Fancy, she's Bobo's best friend, now you've met everybody. What will happen? Will they get the lantern back and rescue Shadow? Or will the lantern fall under the wrong paws of Trixie and the evil fairy cats? Will Bobo and Shadow become friends? Stay tuned to find out....
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There is a difference between telling a story and...telling a story.
Here, you tell me what happens but it's like you're giving a summary of the story. You have to TELL me the story. Show me where this world is, describe it to me, make me see it, feel it, hear it. Tell me why this lantern is so important. Tell me about the characters, describe them to me, show me their good traits and their faults. I can keep going
I'm trying to help
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