it was a saturday after noon when her dad asked her to go to her grandmothers.1
"dad! the Hoods and i were gonna go to the arcade~!" she argued.2
"go or no phone and no friends" her dad said then she was out, riding her harly davison motorcycle.3
"hey red where ya goin?" charlie asked.4
"to grandma's" red siad, glowering.5
"that sucks!" Jacob said as he doe on her right.6
"come on guys..i heard wolves, realy big ones, live here" harry said smiling.7
"oh shut up harry!" they all said in unison.8
they arrived at grandma's house, a huge wolf-not a normal one- was in her bed, grandma, no where to be found.9
"helooo" the wolf bellowed.10
red finaly lost ehr nerve and hog-tied the wolf, while charlie found grandma, in the closet.11
"thanks sunny" grandma said then smiled.12
"anytime, lil' miss ol' red" Charlie said smiling.13
Red sighed as jacob and harry dragged to wolf out of the house.14
"atl;east you came" grandma said smiling. then she winced, her back was hurting her. "that stupid wolf!" she siad as she eased back down on her bed.15
"atleast you're safe, mrs.red" the boys all said as a small wolf-cub wondered in.16
"oh dont mind her, thats fluffy, a wolf cub i adopted yesterday." grandma said petting the small silver wolf-pup.17
"atleast this is a happy ending. grandma im off to hang with my friends, ok?" red said.18
"ok..Fluffy will take care of me" grandma said as the pup licked Red's face.19
"ok..see you around bye" Red and her friends said then dashed out the door.20
they rode thier motercycles to the local arcade to blow thier "hard-saved" alowances.21
[i guess everything worked out in the end for our young bikers. no more evil wolves and the pup grew up to be the perfect friend and guard-wolf. red got to hang with ehr friends plus $50 just for killing the big bad wolf.]
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This was a little difficult to read but it made me laugh. I would've kicked his ass. >_>
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There are quite a few mistakes. You are missing capitals and have some spelling errors. I didn't want to sound mean, sorry. Just some Constructive criticism. You have a great imagination. Your story is very different=] Thank you so much for entering!
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