Super Goth!!

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Ahh to be at home I say to my self as I open up a bag of chedder chips. I love when I get home watch tv and fall asleep. I was on the couch sleep. I woke up just in time of "Chowder". I was singin the theme song, when I heard mom scream,glass break, and a thud on the ground. I ran up the steps I ran to mom holding her head in my lap. I looked at the window. Him again I say outloud. You see, mom dated this guy name Ray and he is always mad at mom for no good reasons, but he took it to far this time. I hurried mom to the car. We drove to the hospital as fast as possible,but the doctor said it was to late. I drove home called dad and told him the news. I was angry after I hung up,not at dad ,but at Ray. I am SO going to get revenge!2

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