There was a boy1
A very strange enchanted boy2
They say he wandered very far, very far3
Over land and sea4
A little shy5
And sad of eye6
But very wise7
Was he8
And then one day9
A magic day he passed my way10
And while we spoke of many things, fools and kings11
This he said to me12
"The greatest thing13
You'll ever learn14
Is just to love15
And be loved16
In return"17
(instrumental interlude)18
"The greatest thing19
You'll ever learn20
Is just to love21
And be loved22
In return"23
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~24
My friend, an encourager, a boy, named Ryo... he always talked about love, as if it was all his life was about. He seemed to reach into my soul and rip it out... because I have felt no love. No love. I ask myself, could it be possible? 25
Days passed, nights filled with tears and sorrow, and over and over again like a reel replaying non-stop on my life. I sat on my bedroom window, looking out into the sunset of the ocean before my face. My hand trembled as I reached to touch my life's death note. Suicide. No one loved me... No one cared. I clenched my fist around it. Death at first sight. Nothing like love. Suddenly I heard the phone ringing. I lay my note down and looked at the number. Ryo. I held it up to my ear, "Hello?" 26
"Yuki..."27
"Yes."28
"The greatest thing I ever learned, is just to love, and be loved in return..."29
I choked on his words. "Is just to love and be loved in return... Love... love..." Tears ran down my face, each burning with love. 30
"R-r-ryo... I now know what love feels like... T-t-thank-you."
A contest entry
- Tell me the story by Mel-the-Believer.
240 points, ended July 11, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
I liked it alot. It made me feel good to know that Ryo saved her. It had a good ending as well.
~Sky
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
-
Good job. Ryo is so sweet. And he SAVED Yuki! Go Ryo GO!!!!
-
Short, but oh so sweet. I loved it. Wonderfully written. Thank you so much for entering. Keep up the writing. Good luck. God Bless!
-
awwwww
Got to love your awesome writings ;-) Dang..... first you surpass me with your drawings and NOW your stories are better than mine ;-) Congrats!!! God has given you a gift




