She died......

Have you ever wondered what happens to people when they die? Well you should ask Mary she has died 3 years ago and then unexpected came to Earth. Half of her body normal and half is torn off. Some say that if you stay up till 4:00 am on Friday the 13 you will be able to see her in a blue night gown with stained blood on it she shall come or she is to busy to get you but will come another day to get you. I know because..............she got my friend Kamila 1 year ago so don't let this happen to you........Here she comes....................................................................................................!!!BOO!!!!!!!

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  • benita1234
    February 15
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    this took me so long to think about


  • Preeti Prasad
    February 6
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    Not really scary at all. You need to fix grammar and spelling. Who's Kamila?