Will the sun rise?

For you it was just a fling1

What good did it bring2

You left me hurt sad and torn3

I found myself wishing i had never been born4

It was over before it begain5

So why was the hurt so strong6

Once you were gone7

People tried to warn me8

Knew i'd get hurt9

They knew what you were10

That boy i could not see11

I only saw what i wanted12

What you and i could be13

You said you still loved your ex14

Wanted to give it another try15

I wanted you to be happy16

All i could say was good bye17

But to find your with some random chick18

The pain so great 19

like a hurrican crippling me inside20

As if i was being ripped apart 21

Stabbed threw the heart22

It seemed i was never real23

To you never a big deal24

But one thing is certain25

I shall never try again26

For you will always leave, when someone better comes along27

It'll always be good bye28

You always leaving me in pain29

Your lyed to get rid of me30

Now i cant sleep at night31

Afraid of what i might dream32

I try with all my might to hold back the screams33

There are constant shadows under my eyes34

Im afraid the sun will never rise35

To chase away the shadows36

clear my tear filled eyes.

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  • jkj2692
    March 15
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    *sobs* that was so sweet


  • Jesslynjello
    February 10

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    I've been there

    If you want it to sound more professional I'd leave out the word chick and ex. Remember to check spelling, I've noticed ppl like my poetry a lot more when everything is spelt right. hope i was of help. (fyi i have a poem like this, 'Broken'. u can check it out if you want

  • wow

    that was really kool you know my next contest is going to be a poem AND a story contest u shoud enter this poem!