Twilight (fan-fic)Part-2

Right then it I knew that Alice had plan the party. I saw someone coming to me with boxes of presents but, I couldn't see their face. Poor little Alice. No one had offered to help her carry the presents. I'm suprised she never fell, I would've fell carrying only one box. "Heyy Bella! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Do you wanna open your presents now or later?"asked Alice1

"Later" 2

'Or never' I thought3

I turned and walked toward Edward who was talking to Carlisle. Before I was half way to him he turn toward me.

Author notes

there will be more. i'm writing this from my psp so I only have limited space.

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  • Rose Hathaway
    March 11

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    This is quite good, but you need to fix up a few words to make the flow better as some of them don't make sense


  • punkrose
    February 8
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    .

    i twilight


  • Ashlyn Rose
    February 6
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    okay...its iffy with the alice part