Kiki: hi Jacob how are you today.1
Jacob: I’am fine, you.2
Kiki: I’ am ok haha so can I ask you some stuff3
Jacob: ummm….ok4
Kiki: so Jacob was it fun to be in twilight?5
Jacob: yeah it was.6
Kiki: so did you see a girl you like?7
Jacob: no why?8
Kiki: I don’t know haha oh no we have to go until next time I will see all of you later bye.9
As I go to my car I see Jacob and Edward at my car I walk up to Jacob and Edward and I said hi can I help you?10
Jacob: oh Kiki I need to tell you something 11
Kiki: oh you do 12
Jacob: yes I do ummm…. Edward can you go so I can talk to Kiki 13
Edward: ok…bye?14
Jacob: sorry Edward! So I need to tell you that i?
To be continued and if you want to be in my story tell me and I will see ok.
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Lol, nice!! I wanna read the next part.
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Lol, this was good
I liked it! The best of luck with finishing on writing it. Another twilight freak like me?
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Nice One Shot
Was good. Lol. Maybe some more dialogue? Hmm? Action? Lol. Eh. I'm one to talk yes? But yeah, I enjoyed it. Wasn't much long, would enough to see more. -
it was horrible!
jk I LOVED IT!!!!!
can i be in ur story????plz?!?! is this ur first story?
beginning: 2, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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i liked it. its a funny screenwrite. i loved it!
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cute fanfiction
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lol kiki this was funny it's well written nice job on it
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ty and yes you can be in my story
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ooh i love it, please continue, and i would love to be in your story
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ty and you will be in the 2 one
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omg!!!! i love it kiki and where was me!!! im not in there lol but chyaa good job
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