A preview of: Midnight in the moon

The light from the moon shone like a giant light, me and my fiends looked towards this night, because this night would be a night of solemn gathering. We posted a web page for serious suicidal people, in the human world, not this underworld. Tonight we would need fresh human blood to complete the transformation. We had longed for the day we would be human again...

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  • CrystalTigress
    February 9

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    ok

    really rather short and i wish rather than sending a preview that you would have sent the story. Thanks for entering the contest i will reread all before judging good luck!