Once upon a time, there was a palace on a hill. In there, lived a prince and princess with a king and queen. The princess had a fairy godmother but she didn't know that.1
One day, she went out of the palace to have a walk. When she was walking she heard a voice behind her. It was actually the fairy godmother but she didn't notice.2
The fairy godmother was supposed to not let the princess know she was here. Because, she was scared the king won't like her because he doesn't believe in magic. So, she used a magic spell to make herself invisible.3
But the princess felt something; it was actually the fairy godmother. She was surprised so she forgot to maintain the magic spell so the princess saw her.4
The fairy godmother knew the princess was good so she said, “I am your fairy godmother.” The princess said, “ I believe you, come to the palace to have some tea”. And so they went into the palace.5
The prince was having a walk as well in the palace garden. He bumped into a jolly old man. He wore red and his belly jiggled as he talked. “You must be Jolly old Santa Claus, why are you here? It isn't Christmas yet”. 6
Santa Claus said, “ I was listening to what children want for Christmas, and writing down a list. I couldn't hear well, so I decided to go out on my sleigh to go a bit closer. But I accidentally fell down my sleigh down to earth, I can't go back up without my reindeer”.7
Meanwhile, the princess and the fairy godmother finished their tea. “ I have a pet called horsey. He is a Pegasus, a horse that can fly. Would you you want to ride on him?” Asked the Fairy Godmother. “I sure would,” replied the princess. 8
So of they went on horsey. He stretched his wings, then flapped them. The princess and the fairy godmother slowly rose upwards on horsey.9
Suddenly, princess spotted something. “I think I see the prince, with a red person next to him, fairy godmother”, said the princess. “Can you tell horsey to land over there to see?” “Okay”, the fairy godmother said. “ Horsey, land there, she pointed to the prince. Horsey swooped lower and landed.10
It was really the prince. “Hello, sister, I found Santa Claus. Who's this?”, he asked looking at the fairy godmother. Quickly, the fairy godmother explained what happened. “And who's this?” Asked the princess looking at Santa Claus. Santa Claus explained everything to the princess.11
They didn't see a evil witch hiding behind the bushes. She grabbed the princess and flew away on her broomstick. The fairy godmother shouted, “go horsey, after that witch.” The prince and Santa Claus jumped on horsey and raced after the witch.12
But it was no use, the witch was faster than horsey and horsey was very tired chasing the witch. Horsey soon slowed down. “ Oh no”, said the fairy godmother. 13
By then, the witch had already locked the princess in a tall, tall, tower. She cackled, “ now princess stay here, I'm going out to the forest to spy on the fairy godmother on her Pegasus. Oh, I do hate that fairy godmother.”14
Author notes
My sister really wants to put her story in storywrite, it isn't written by me.
Comments
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This is terrific but unfinished. I love the naive style this story is written in, straight across with no pretense and a collection of the most interesting characters. You need to finish this story. I can just see this on a coffee table as something amusing to read while one is whiling away time.


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That is why it's only part 1. Thanks for you comment.
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