Smell of Sex

Tonight was the night.1

Jenna knew it. She stood before the mirror, taking in her body. She wanted everything to be just right for tonight. She took her time getting prepared. 2

She took special care to clean every spot on her body with a lavender body soap in the shower. She took special care to shave every part of her body including between her legs. She rubbed a simple moisturizing lotion all over her body, adding in the smallest dab of baby oil to make her arms and face shine with softness. She dabbed vanilla on sensual places on her body including her neck, shoulder, chest, hips, and other unmentionable places. She giggled at where his nose and mouth would explore. She'd read in a magazine that when a man smelled vanilla, it drove his hormones crazy.3

Jenna had decided to slip on her sexiest strapless bra and matching panties that she'd never worn before. They were black lace with the tiniest bow as a centerpiece between her supple breasts on the fabric.4

She washed, dried, and placed her long, soft brown hair down over her shoulder. She decided to make it a little wavy that night. She added soft curves and curls with her iron, being sure not to add too many products that would stiffen it. 5

She used little and light makeup to soften her facial features. When she was done putting it on, she'd realized that she had taken up fifteen minutes.6

This was her fifth date with Will. She was actually surprised she had been able to wait this long until she would have sex with him. Their very first date was incredible, and that night she wanted to sleep with him. Somehow, she told herself that it was just too soon. She felt as though she was falling for him already.7

Only ten minutes until he was to arrive to pick her up, she had slipped on her clothes. She'd decided to wear a nice black halter dress and black slip on heels. All one color. She'd never worn all black before; it just wasn't like her. She decided to add in some silver jewelry and a black and silver purse.8

Jenna was just looking one last time in the mirror when the doorbell chimed. She smiled, checking her teeth, grabbed her bag, and then headed for the door. She opened it, to find Will, standing with his hands in his pockets, smiling up at her.9

She gleamed back. He stood before her, wearing a white dress buttoned down dress shirt and black pants. His short brown hair seemed to be in a neat mess, carefully planned. Still, he looked as handsome as ever.10

"Hi," he said, smiling still. "You look...wow, um...great." 11

"Is it a little too much?" She asked.12

"Oh, no. It's just fine." His smile still spread across his face. He gazed at her for a few more seconds before taking her hand and helping her step off her porch.13

He helped her into his car, and went around to his side, seeming to be in a rush. He instantly turned on the ignition as he stepped in, and instantly the radio kicked on booming Three Doors Down in the back.14

"Are we in a hurry?" She asked, half smiling.15

"Nope." He smiled. She chuckled and leaned back into the leather seat, crossing her ankles and listened to the radio. 16

They drove for about forty minutes, before Will parked into a lot that overlooked the Pacific Ocean. Jenna looked out at the beautiful flowers, trees, and beach. She had been to the ocean many times, but never at nighttime, and it surprised her just how beautiful it was. Her smile came back again.17

"Well... let's go." He smiled.18

She stepped out of the car and shut the door. She looked around, wondering where they were going. She looked to her right, seeing a white beach house with beautiful lights. It had wide windows, where she could see couples and families eating and laughing. For some reason, seeing the lovely building made her smile.19

He went around the car and took her by the hand. He looked into her face and smiled.             She grinned back and was led by his hand to the entrance. He let her inside first and ordered a table to eat.20

"This place is lovely. Why have I not been here before?"21

"They built it just last winter. They just opened it this summer." He answered.22

"Is this a seafood restaurant? I hate seafood."23

He laughed. "Not all of it. Don't worry. If you don't like anything, we'll go somewhere else. Like McDonald's."24

She smiled. "Mmmm, McDonald's."25

"You want McDonald's? I'll take you."26

She laughed again. "No, this place is really nice."27

He smiled again and the waitress came by. After deciding for a few minutes, she settled on a small steak and he ordered lobster.28

"Thank god. I was afraid you were one of those girls that eats a piece of lettuce and has a water. I hate that. No sense it going out, we coulda' just went to the dumpster." He said.29

"Not me. I'm a pig."30

"Yeah it shows." He laughed.31

"Thanks, glad I could please you." She smiled taking in the joke. She went to take a drink of the water set out for her.32

"There are other ways of pleasing me." He said. 33

She almost dropped her water on the table.34

"That sounded wrong. I'm sorry." He half frowned and grinned. She smiled and shook her head.35

The waitress came with their orders and they ate, talking about more things like their childhood and parents, avoiding the awkward moment.36

They had finished their meals and she looked out the beach house window.37

"Wanna take a walk?" He asked.38

She nodded. They went outside, and walked along the beach barefoot, his hand around her waist as they walked.39

It was quiet. They talked about nothing, just listened to the waves, and the crickets coming out at night. The water splashed across their feet a few times which made the sand stick to their feet, but they didn't seem to mind. They continued to walk in a comfortable silence. Then, Jenna started to speak.40

"Ya know what I'm thinking about?" She asked.41

"No, what?"42

"That movie Pulp Fiction." There was a pause. Will looked confused. "When Uma Thurman and John Travolta are at the restaurant, and they don't talk for about 5 minutes. And Uma says, 'You know you've found someone special when you can have one comfortable silence and shut the hell up for a moment.'" 43

Will smiled. "Yeah, this is pretty comfortable. But I should be getting you home."44

"I'm not a 13-year-old girl," she smirked. "I'm a 22-year-old masseuse who has her own apartment and a car. So, ha." She stuck her tongue out at him. He laughed. They still made their way up to the car.45

They slipped their shoes back on and returned to the car. Jenna once again drifted into the warm leather seats and listened to the radio. Will had turned it down to some calming classical as they made their way towards her house.46

Atleast ten minutes into the drive, Jenna had softly dozed off. Will smiled as her breathing became quiet and relaxed. She laid her head against the seat and laid still. The drive was quiet and calming for Will. He thought about Jenna all the way to her house and how he cared about her. A soft sprinkle of rain started to come down as he pulled into the driveway of the apartment building. Luckily, Jenna lived on the first floor.47

He turned off the ignition and looked towards her. They rain was building up on the windows. "Jenna?" He tapped her softly. It was no use. She was sound asleep. He decided he would carry her in. 48

He opened her purse to find her keys, but expected to find tampons. There were none, which made him smile. 'Must not be the right time,' he thought and smiled. He found her door key and quickly stepped out of the car and jogged to the passenger side.49

Will opened the door and picked her up, cradling her against his body. She held on to his neck with her arms. Her shoes had slipped off while she was sleeping. He decided to come back and get them after putting her in bed. He walked over to her door and ,with difficulty balancing her, he slipped in the key and opened the door. 50

He shut the door. Will hadn't been in her house, but he quickly found the bedroom. It was an all white bedroom, which somehow surprised him. He lay her on the bed, as she stirred.51

"Will?" She said clearly.52

"Shh, I'm putting you in bed. You fell asleep, you're tired."53

"No, I'm not."54

"Yes-"55

"No, Will." She looked up to him with non-sleepy eyes. "I pretended to be asleep just to get you into my bedroom." 56

She smiled along with his, but her smile went away as she leaned up and kissed him. He didn't know how to respond, but his caring for her had surged through his body. He kissed her body, opening her mouth and slipping his tongue inside to meet hers. She widened her mouth and let her tongue slide against his, as she relished the thought of his tongue being in other places. 57

He drew his arm up her leg and began to rub her arm. She began to unbutton his shirt as she slid into the center of the bed and he slid to her side. He slipped off his shoes and reached behind his back to pull off his shirt. She instantly pressed her hands into his muscular chest and shoulders. Jenna felt his hard back and neck as he kissed her neck. She whimpered at his touch. She quickly drew her jewelry from her ears and neck and tossed them onto the table. He leaned down to give her another passionate kiss as his hand moved up her silky legs. 58

Will thought that her body was too amazing to be this good. He knew she had planned this. The way she smelled, her looks, how she felt. She was so smooth and silky. Her hair smelled of honey and chestnuts. What was that smell on her neck? It sent tingles down his neck every time he took a whiff. 59

Jenna's breathing became deeper and at a quicker pace. She tried to quiet herself and be relaxed, but she couldn't. She grew nervous as his hand slid up her thigh to her hips. Her dress was slipping up as his hand drew closer and closer to her waist. She slipped she halter around her neck off and began to slide it down her legs. Will slid his hand up to her hair and pressed his hand against its softness as he brung his lips back up to hers.60

She moaned against his lips. Her hands rushed along his back towards his chest and down to his hips. She unbuttoned and unzipped his pants, sliding them down past his butt and down his thighs. His hands traveled down her arms to her tummy where he began to slide down the top of her dress to her ankles where she kicked it to the floor. His hands rubbed her waist and went up to her chest. He felt her breasts, rubbing them softly, letting her hard center come out. He wrapped his hands around her back while running his mouth down her neck to her chest.61

He reached and unhooked the straps, letting her flesh fall to his lips. He kissed her breasts letting his warm tongue glide over her hard nipples. He rubbed his lower teeth against it as Jenna sighed. She bit down on her own bottom lip as her back arched against his mouth. He continued to lick her breasts, taking his time with each one. Jenna moaned as she rubbed his hair and her back arched closer to his mouth. She let out a long gasp.62

His hands went down to her lace panties, sliding them down as Jenna worked at sliding down his pants. All that remained on Will was his shorts. Jenna slid them down and off to the floor as he kissed her again. 63

Will broke their kiss and looked into Jenna's eyes. She understood his eyes as he slid off of her and to her side and laid down. She sat up and leaned over him, kissing his lips and sliding her tongue down his chin, neck and chest. She traced her fingers down to his hips where her eyes met his masculine member. She hesitated, her voice caught in her throat as she let out a whimper. 64

She immediately took the tip into her mouth and flicked her tongue on the underside. She slid her tongue down the side as it hardened along her sensual touches of her lips, fingers, and tongue. She moaned and breathed against his, which made him shudder and perk. Her hands trailed along the base. She was gentle, brushing her fingertips and nails lightly against it, giving him a tickling sensation that made the hair on his neck rise. She took his stiffened length into her mouth once again and began to move it up and down throughout her throat. She hummed a bit, the vibrations and the hand strokes building up his heat. Her tongue went to the top and all the way back to the base where she let her teeth very softly drag. She kissed it, her licks becoming quicker and at a faster pace that any saliva left behind never grew cold. She took a strong hold of the base and brought her hand up towards the tip. She lapped up the first bits of pre-cum. 65

His moans grew stronger, he took hold of her hair, massaging her scalp in pleasure. She went up to his tip her tongue flicking along the underside. She placed a kiss on the head and decided to crawl up along his chest. 66

Will sat up and looked to her face. She took hold of his shoulders ready for the ever anticipated meeting of their hot organs. His breathing became deep as he lifted her and settled himself inside her. She gasped deeply as his size. She hadn't realized just how masculine he really was. Her eyes widened and glazed as she rocked back and forth on him. She gripped tighter on his shoulders, as she buried her hips into his. He moaned against her and kissed her neck and shoulders. 67

Again and again he shoved himself inside her, their moans and gasps uniting into a fast rhythm. She bit down on her lip, her toes curled as she continued her fast paced rhythm. Her moans turned into light screams and deep breaths. 68

His hands traveled to her hips. He squeezing her rocking hips and rubbed her inner thighs. His hand lightly traveling to her moving clit. He massaged it roughly against her quivering hips. She shuddered, her drive shooting up, wanting and needing more of his body. He continued to pleasure her clit while smelling the sweetest scents on her breasts. 69

She grew weak from her pleasure. She felt weightless and she couldn't move. "Will," she moaned.  70

He kissed her shortly, giving her the quick taste of his tongue before pulling himself out of her. He laid her to his side as she opened her legs. He spotted her womanhood quickly and couldn't resist the temptation of having a taste. He dipped his head between her legs, tasting her sweet valley. She moaned and again gripped his shoulder. Her heart beat wildly as his tongue filled strokes danced between her legs. Her light screams returned as he continued to pleasure her. He rubbed and squeezed her hips once more, his hardness throbbing, wanting to bury itself inside her. The scent... that secret scent that he just couldn't identify was settled there. His nose went wild, his tongue strokes again increasing its pace. His member throbbed to enter her as her screams became louder. 71

He leaned up and guided his tool to her heated hips. He pressed into her, as her screams turned shrill and loud. He thrust again into her, the moans escaping his throat becoming fuller and deep. Her knees pressed into his sides as he reentered, his incoming heat traveling up his tool. He filled her, her moans keying that she was being satisfied. She continued to bite her lip and squeeze his chest. His roughness didn't discourage her. 72

He could tell he was about come. "Jenna," he managed to say. "I...oh.." He groaned as his warmth reached its tip. She pushed him out as he let out his load to the floor. He collapsed to her side, the sweat on his forehead built up. 73

She pulled up the scrambled white sheet and covered herself. She lay at his side, letting her wrist settle to her forehead as her chest heaved beneath the white cotton cloth. She turned to him and laid across his chest, kissing it. She covered his settled member and his hips and looked up at him, resting her chin on his peck. 74

"I'm starving," was all he said. She laughed and told them that they had eaten a little over an hour ago.75

"So? Aren't you hungry?"76

She thought for a minute. She felt silly about having to ask herself if she was hungry. She laughed. She was, so she replied with a nod.77

"Yeah, but it's a little past midnight." She said.78

"What's open?" 79

She laughed. "McDonald's?"80

Author notes

I didn't just want to make a sex story. I dont like the idea of having sex right on the spot without meeting someone. It just doesn't seem realistic, and it's hard to write. So this is about two people on their fifth date. And instead of making the date boring, I tied in the date with the sex. I hope you guys out there enjoy.

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  • Daoine
    November 6, 2005
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    It's a thoughtful, excellent story. The dialogue flowed smoothly and the characters were charming. Other than a few grammar errors, not many, nothing that can't be fixed later. I do that with my stories as well, go back and read to correct grammar errors. I really like the plot. Your POV was well done. Keep it up. I would really like to see more from these characters. Daoine


  • purplelirpa
    November 5, 2005
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    my boyfriend's name is will, so this one was an interesting read for me..hehe...so sex smells like vanilla, eh? It was very well-written and well paced, with nice attention to all the preparations we women go through for our men.


  • Captain Jack
    June 25, 2005
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    >:) heheheheheh

    Hahahahah! That was funny! I normally don't think erotica should be humorous but you pulled it off nicely! heheheh but I shouldn't be reading this! Mommy might catch me heheh but hey, it was worth the risk , a cute piece with a romantic feeling behind it. I liked it a lot lol and it was unrelentingly sensual and erotic, a very "delicious" combination if i do say so myself... Methinks this is worth reading over n over n over again! heheh Good job!


  • sugs
    June 12, 2005
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    wow !

    the pains taken on details are worh applaud,i like it too that its the fifth date and it has a story instead of being a mere sex sizzler

    it makes it and you , different

    great write

    keep on writing

    luv


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar
    June 12, 2005
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    Love is overexposed and...

    The description is about the open sex of two lovefull hearts which has been picturised through and through in details to enjoy the feeling with the happening with two characters of the write. It is very natural presentation and just true too. The flow of the write represents the mood of the subject very nicely. The scenario built to highlight the nature's pleasure through the bodies of the humans have been explored properly. I appreciate the style of writing and its presentation too.prabhudayal khattar


  • psychomonkey
    June 12, 2005
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    I really liked it, I thought that the ending was cute, great write, i look foward to reading the rest of ur stuff.


  • LadyLillith
    June 10, 2005
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    Very descriptive!

    I like the description. Well done. I like the last part of dialouge adds a piece of humor to the whole thing.

  • FloeticMind
    June 10, 2005
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    This story was real cool... I found it hard to turn away from. Keep up the good work.

  • nike
    June 9, 2005
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    Very nice. You told an excellent story doing a great job of developing you characters, the background and the storyline. The erotic parts were no overly done and not graphic. Great touches of humour are applied throughtout in a wonderful consistantcy. Truly a very nice piece of writing.

    Keep writing.

  • Ally-Skittle
    June 7, 2005
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    I really like the use of McDonald's at the end. You put something in at the beginning of the story and used it humorously at the end. Very well written

  • benevolence
    June 5, 2005
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    I enjoyed this. Liked the way you you kept everything from the date to sex innocent. Also loved the end...very true to life

  • ApatheticEmotions
    June 4, 2005
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    Spicey Hot!

    You made it very realistic with the woman making the first initiative. Very good...I think I've had a date like this come to think of it. I liked it very much. Plus, you actually made them having sex very realistic. And you made Will so seemingly hot that I have a picture in my head of what he could look like. I know its a good story when I can picture details in my head. Very good, keep it up!

  • Princess of Shade
    June 3, 2005
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    Wow thanks for your guys's compliments! It means a lot! But I'm kind of disappointed that its had 40 view and only 4 comments!.


  • Ashlend
    June 3, 2005
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    the ending was cute. I liked the story a lot.


  • ayten
    June 3, 2005
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    Great attention to details, the story was really reailistic. I liked the end really fuuny which to me is the best i think sex should be fun not like some chore. the setting for the date was really romantic and i liked how Jenna was kinda sneaky she practcally roped the gut in having sex. the whole thing was light hearted and fun, really good.


  • niners
    June 3, 2005
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    great work

    I love it ...i'm one of those girls that would rather eat at mcdonalds than a fancy seafood reseraunt and the fact that u put it at the beach and you have so much detail made the story that much better

  • Miss Faerie
    June 3, 2005
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    This is really great! It got my attention and the way that you created the characters for me, with appearance and all was wonderful. You used there words "where" and "instantly" a lot but I found I did when i first started writing too.
    This was really well done
    Shari

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