"What do you want me to name you ?What do you want to be called?" Celine' asked the little boy. "I like Kevin! Please name me Kevin! "He exclaimed. "Kevin it is! You are now officially Kevin, my new little brother!" At this,they hugged each other and began jumping up and down with glee and then hand in hand they began to skip down the path thet were on. Pretty soon, they noticed a light coming through the opening of a pathway they were on.Entranced by the light,they made their way over to the opening.There was a most beautiful sight.In brilliant sunshine,there were the most beautiful and unusual flowers they had ever seen before.
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Funnily enough, this little piece is cute. It has detail and very good wording. I'm not sure what exactly is going on here, but I found it amusing.
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Haha. I have always loved cute little stories like this one!! It has great detail, although really short. It would be wonderful to read it you lengthened it out a bit ;D
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Enjoying your work!
Ooooooh,(closing eyes and imagining this wonderful place...)
lol! Okay, Now I must read on
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I'm glad to see you continuing this. I have been enjoying it very much. I'm sure my son will enjoy it also. Looking forward to the next part.
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Thanks, Howard!
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