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Those eyes, such mesmerizing eyes. they changed and now i really am freaking out. Fang curls up as i pet him on the head. "am i a prisoner here? can i leave?" i ask slightly scared.1

"lady Shay why would you leave? you don't have any where to go? besides you wouldn't leave me alone again would you?"

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