i missed you today...

I missed you today because the first thing I did this morning when I woke up was cry. I missed you today when I opened my eyes from washing my face because the person I saw in the mirror looking back at me wasn't me...but the person I used to be...the one that you cared for. I missed you today because the first words that came out of my mouth this morning as I walked around hopelessly and helplessly and seemingly lost, was your name. I called out to you to rescue me but you couldn't hear me. You are too far away.1

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  • shattered-dreams-xx
    June 29, 2005
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    awww..omg this poem is really sweet i like it so much i can really kinda relate.. the guy i was going out with broke up with me.. i was so in love with him.. and i still am.. tahts exactly how i felt/ feel... i hope ur ok tho.. good poem

  • allianceofdefiance
    June 10, 2005
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    awwwwww

    I MISS YOO TOO..........we gotta break the law together.............we have to see each other!!!this sucks ya mean? I hate not being able to see you....

  • allianceofdefiance
    June 10, 2005
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    aww

  • TheLostGirl13
    June 6, 2005
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    Thats realy good i see you have been hurt and i would have to say that SUCKS!! Read some of my poetry when you get a chance and comment plz

  • SunnyDaysAreHere
    June 2, 2005
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    thanx for the comment and applause. it means a lot.


  • spoilt angel
    June 2, 2005
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    aw dats so cute!!!!! i am lovin dis! xxx

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