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'Were you ever in love?' he asks one day, draped over the cushions on the sofa in my living room. I have my back to him, I'm pouring myself a glass of something that smells rather like fudge, and my hands shake and my fingers grasp just a little too hard on the fragile glass.2
All I can think is 'how dare you ask me that'3
So I tell him 4
slowly...5
'Just once.'6
Author notes
The beginning of a story I have in my head right now. Don't know how long it'll be, how it turns out, or if anyone (me) will like it in the end. Please take the time to stop by later on and read the continuation of this, I beg you ...
What did you think? Please comment!
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I will continue to read...I rather like the beginning. It sounds very interesting and leading...yay!
♥ Jen -
thank you for commenting
appreciate it
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thanks so much for reading, I appreciate it
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I'm intrigued, can't wait to read the rest of it. I will add you to my favourites so I know when you written more if that's ok with you.
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This sounds like a great beginning to a beautiful story. I hope to be able to read this story in the near future. So get to writing it and notify me when it is done. Wait how about I just check in everyday until it is done. I really look forward to it.
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Love the one and only never phony,
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