I tremble with tears streaming from my eyes,1
My heart feels as though it were to break,2
Crumble, Crush, deteriorate,3
As though the whole world has stopped in time.4
I look up to view my mascara stained face,5
My aching body, cold from the pain,6
Isolated, numb, alone,7
Then i see your eyes cast a glimpse into mine.8
You raise my head, with your gentle hands,9
I look deep into your eyes searching for answers,10
Why?, Is it me?, What did i do?11
My anger beats back the remainder of tears.12
The words echo through my mind,13
A repetitive drum, "We're over"14
Aching, Dying, Everlasting,15
My legs can't stand the weight of my heart.16
You hold me with a warm feeling, 17
I use to feel safe in your arms,18
Happy, content, loved,19
Now i feel pushed out into the ongoing vortex.20
I use to think our love was forever,21
You were mine to keep close,22
My treasure, My hope, My life,23
You looked at me in a way no-one else would.24
You were the air i breathed,25
You were the love i felt,26
You were the tears i cried,27
You were the hope i now lost.28
And now i lie hear broken and alone,29
You left me to collect the pieces of an unfix-able heart,30
Broken, Sharp, pain,31
I thought you were different.32
The smell you left on my pillow has gone,33
The smile that brightened my room is dull,34
Dark, brittle, insecure,35
I now know the meaning of love.36
Love is a feeling I felt with you,37
Love is a desire i needed to have,38
Love is a smile only you could make,39
But now love is me living without you with no more heartache.40
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'Suteki de Ne'
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My legs can't stand the weight of my heart.
beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I cannot think of another way to describe it. Thank you so much for entering and good luck.
Cassie
The one person who is worth your tears will be the one who doesn't make you cry. -
Beautiful romantic tribute... eloquent imager
A beautiful romantic tribute with wonderful imagery ... "Love is a feeling I felt with you,
Love is a desire i needed to have,
Love is a smile only you could make,
But now love is me living without you with no more heartache." Very nicely done
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wow the emotion in that poem was well wow the way you put it together was fantastic sad but a good poem good luck in the contest
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i like the way you worded it. it helps tell the story and give it a good heart felt feeling
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Wow hunni this is amazing, made me all upset and tearful lol. It's a shame love and cause so much pain
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wow, amazing stuff....brought back some memories there babe...painful ones, but hey you got through to me showing that im not a shallow person whose hollow with no feelings, this is an amazing poem! well written, kinda speechless, well done and good luck, l8az love ya sky xxxxx
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wow huni, i felt all the emotion in this, yeh i think i gna cry too jess!!! well done!!!! xxxx
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aw, hun its so sad!!!! i fink im gonna cry......xxx
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wow, that's a heartfelt poem written with a lot of emotion. It's good I like it a lot. You completely drew me into your world, well the poem's world, I'm sorry if you do feel this way, great poem.
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