Wine and Roses

She had been living with me for months but still her scent I love. I haven't gotten use to smelling her beautiful blood. She was cooking when I came home from school. I had a bunch of girls wanting me today. It was Valentines Day but I didn't care. No one could know she was here. 1

They would kill her, royality is suppose to fall in love with a vampire or werewolf. Not an innocent human girl. I'm not in love. I just am dreaming. I never found this little homeless girl and brought her home. I thought to myself. She turned around and smiled. 2

Her green eyes went over me and her black hair was pulled into a ponytail, "Hope you like steak!" She exclaimed all excited. I smirked without realizing it, she had no idea. I was half vampire and half werewolf. It was a royality thing, "Seth?" She asked and smiled up at me. She was so small.3

"Yeah! I love steak!" I assured her and put my bag down on the little red couch in the corner of the room. Then sat down as she served dinner, "Do you know what day it is?" I asked and smiled.4

"Um,....Friday, right?" Alissa asked and smiled.5

"Yes, but no, it's Valentines Day!" I explained, "It's when people who love or have crushes on someone else give them roses, choclate or other kinds of gifts. But it doesn't have to be crushes or lovers, it can be friends." I began and pulled a red rose from my back and gave it to her.6

Her face lit up into a beautiful smile, "Oh, thank you!" She replied and took the rose. Then breathedin the smell, "It smells so beautiful!" 7

"I am glad you like it. Now eat, missy!" I demanded and she put the rose by her and started to eat. She was so clueless on how much I cared about her. I told her she could stay till she got a job but I now didn't ever want her to leave.8

She smiled brightly at me when we finished our dinner. She was always so cruious on my scool that was taken place at night. I happily answered her questions. But she never knew what type of students went. 9

Alissa was such a clueless girl, "What did you do while I was gone?" I asked her.10

"Oh, I read another book!" She explained and her green eyes sparkled, "I finished it right before I started to cook!" 11

"You love those books, don't you?" I asked and smiled. She was so beautiful and funny just with those human things and little teenager things she loved to do.12

"Of course! They are so.......lovely." She exclaimed with a bright smile. She never seemed to be frowning or crying. Always smiling bright and happy. After all she's been through.13

"Get your shower and I'll clean up." I told her and smiled. I couldn't do anything else. She was happy and I was happy. I guess I've never really had a true friend but hey, she was a great one.14

"Thank you!" She jumped up and disappeared down the small hall and I started cleaning. Soon enough I was doneand lying on the couch while I flipped through the channels. 15

When she came in the smell hit me. I smiled at the scent, right now the rose smell was more powerful over the wine smell. She came over with the red rose and sat down on the other couch that was small.16

I breathed in deeper and deeper, but still the smell didn't go away. I could feel her eyes on me, going over my features again and again. I wondered...17

I sat up and smiled at her, "Come sit with me." She made a puzzled look and came over and sat down.18

"Yes?" She asked and my mouth watered at her beautiful scent, "What-t-t-t would you like to watch?" I asked as I stared at her neck. Then let my eyes roam her body. She was in a tank top and grey cotton shorts. 19

"Um, I don't know. It's your turn to choose." She began and I turned the TV off.20

Alissa looked at me and was obvoisly confused. I hugged her and rested my head on her shoulder and breathed in and out deeply. The smell so beautiful and wonderful, "Do you know how good you smell?" I asked. Her wet black hair was down her back and her was beating fast.21

"Um, well, I-I-I just got out of the shower..." She began but I put my finger to her lips and kissed her neck. I could hear her heart fly, "Wha-" she began. But I pressed my lips to her's and kissed her. At first she didn't kiss back. Finally, she got the picture and kissed me back. I made my way down her jawline and to her neck. I lost controle and bit. I heard her go, "Oh, you're a vampire...." She began, "Drink, until your thirst is quinched." She whispered and ran her fingers through my light brown hair. I seperated and she laid down. Soon fell asleep. I put the rose on her chest and smiled.22

"You're so beautiful." I whispered in her ear. While I watched her sleep.

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  • Lois.Stone
    February 2

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    Very good for your first contest! Detailed, with emotions. However, there were a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but there were only a few. You are very talented, and this is a very lovely piece! Well done!

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