I Can't Be Perfect For You

If there was anyone in the world I could be perfect for, it would be you, but I can't and you're going to have to live with that.

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  • Ana-Andrea
    February 28
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    I forgot the applause!

  • Ana-Andrea
    February 28

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    Hey, the person you can't be perfect for isn't perfect either! It is hypocritical and unfair... to say the least... to demand perfection in others as if we believe ourselves to have achieved perfection. People like that are absolutely not worth wasting a moment of thought on.


  • citcat
    February 28

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    that was really good for one sentence...It was really strong aswell. great work


    citcat


  • Tiger-Lily
    February 11

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    Nice one. Edward Cullen would be affronted - isn't he perfect or something?

    But nonetheless, a beautiful entry. And I so agree. Screw perfectionists.

    - HT


    • beezy92
      February 11
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      HAHA YES! Thank you. IS Edward Cullen perfect? I know a lot of people think so...


      • Melli
        February 22
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        I firmly believe he is not.


        • beezy92
          February 23
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          Is that like a Twilight thing? Vampires are perfect? (Hello...they suck blood out of people!)

          • Melli
            February 23
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            Well, kind of. Their looked upon as 'perfect', if you dont know they are vampires. Though, Edward is supposed to be perfect. but he's not.

  • SilentMoonDance
    February 8
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    Nice...

    Just one sentence yet it says so much. No one's perfect, that's for sure.(:


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    February 4

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    Strong.

    I can imagine a girl saying something like "sorry, man, you can't mold me into your 'perfect' woman" with a matching Tyra snap (That snap thing she does while waving her arm)

    It could have been said "softer" - but I like the direct way it's stronger

    • beezy92
      February 4
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      HAHA! Tyra makes me laugh. I like her shows. And she's fun to look at. She's like a Barbie doll. (: She's a little immature though. She used to be mature and it's like she's growing backwards. (: I like early Tyra.

      Okay Tyra monologue over. Thanks, Soda!


  • MsAlee gold member
    February 2

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    Great sentence. We can only be perfectly ourselves which unfortuantely others won't see as perfect at all.


  • TNTrouble
    February 2

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    Very good...and you followed the rule about saying where you are from. None of us are perfect but some people expect us to be eh?


    • beezy92
      February 2
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      Yeah. (: As if we aren't already away of our imperfection.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    February 1

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    Good way to say 'i'm flawed, live with it'. No one can be perfect, it's just not possible.

    great job.
    Rian,

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