He hit her again last night. Hit her emotionally. Right in the brain. 1
He screams..gives orders.2
She follows.3
"I love you" she tells him..waiting for a honest return. 4
"I love you too." It doesnt seem to come from the soul the way she hoped for..5
Not the way she loves him.6
"you can't leave me, without me..you are nothing. Nothing"7
She has the mental problem, or a fear of being alone. So he basically as tellnig the truth.8
that is all she really wants. is for him to be true.9
But he screams..gives orders.10
She follows..11
She cried again last night. Because he hit her. Emotionally.12
And shes down..13
Author notes
It's short i know, but hey!! it is a story
What did you think? Please comment!
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It's not gay! I really liked, I do wish it had more...now you have me wanting a second part! I love it cus it does say sooooooo much in so few words! That's real talent!
-Laura -
thanks..its pretty darn gay though.
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omg..i like this alot... real short and...yea.. but the one line outta there got me...--Shortty
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I hate guys that treat girls like dirt :-X oh it makes me so maaaad!!! But good story! I liked it. Yeah, it was short, but you can tell a lot in just a few short words. Good job
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that sucks that he treats her like this. she needs to go out with bobby soo bad!
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