Am I dying today?1
The neverending question.2
Watching, waiting, knowing Death will come, announced or unannouced. He prays each day for God to save his soul.3
He prays each day for God to take him home.4
The hint of death always overhead.5
But wait what's this?6
You find your mother dead.7
She lies so still.8
No answer to her name.9
How can this be?10
Your Moma, she is dead.11
Your friend, your strength to get you through the death that waits at home.12
Her chair is empty like your heart.13
Loneliness sets in.14
How will your cope?15
For death awaits to take your husband home.16
You will be left behind with no one to hold your hand.17
Do you have the strength to live or will you choose to die?18
A contest entry
- Depressing poetry by try2changeme.
125 points, ended February 3, 54 entries
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Comments
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This is full of pain and saddness. On some strange level I can relate. The loneliness I suppose. Thank you for sharing such an emotional piece.
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This really shows emotion, which is nice in poetry! Very depressing, but nice job!!! I enjoyed reading it!
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I see your pain dear lady, you write good and from the heart, I love your writes
Please don`t despaire, you have to be strong
best wishes to you and your`s -
I cant messege you write my computure isn't working right, I'm at school. So sorry.
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So Deep
I really like your writting. It shows deph and emotion. Good job
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