A Negative Sentence

I know you're not perfect and you have a hard life, but maybe notice that you're not the only one with those conditions and lower your standards a little.

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Dedicated to...well if she ever finds this I won't want her to know it's her. (:

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  • Hmm. Some people DO act as if they have the worst life... but yeah, do tell this to everyone out there who acts as if the world is hellish.. they oughtta go to Somalia and some other impoverished place and see the plight of those people


  • TNTrouble
    February 1

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    Sorry mate...great sentence but I have to DQ it for not following the rule about saying where you are from.


    • beezy92
      February 1
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      That's okay, I understand. (: Sorry I missed that, I don't know how I did. Great contest, anyway! (:

  • oliviathegreatx3
    January 30

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    I know exactly what you mean!
    I have a 'friend' who is just like this and it drives me fricking INSANE.
    Well worded; it would have taken me paragraphs to combine all that into one sentence

    • beezy92
      January 30
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      Haha poor you. This person who shall go unmentioned juwst told me not five minutes ago "I'm drilling this into your head for when you get out on your own." and I was like "I've been on my own."
      "No you haven't."
      "Okay well I've been on my own and had to deal with annoying men." (since I was eight and you left me for hours on end at the library around the corner from a mental institution AND a homeless shelter.)
      "Okay you can be quiet now." ARGH!!! I have so many negative sentences to express.

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