The Babies Smile1
I walked into the hospital ward and there was your mother, just lying there under the sheets with the sweat forming on her face and her chest heaving as she gulped down the air. She looked like she had run a mile and only just got back, but she went right out the window when i saw you lying on your back.2
"Oh my God!" I sighed to you mother "Can i pick him up?" I asked.3
"Sure just be careful he's still fragile" She laughed4
I reached into the cot i tried not to shake as i held you up, your little body pressed against mine, your tiny heartbeat racing. I lay you gently across my lap and stroked your fine black hair looking into your scrunched up face. I thought you were about to cry and i thought my heart would break instead i saw your mouth open up and you smiled at me with your heart and soul.5
"He smiled at me" I managed to speak with the last air i had in my lungs6
"He isn't old enough to smile he's only 7 hours old" Your mother tried to tell me. I knew though i knew that you had smiled at me, and in that moment when you did i saw your life unfold. I watched you grow into a toddler, watched you take your first step and say your first word. Then blossom into a young teenager excelling at school and having your first kiss and your first car then you grew into an adult and i saw you at your job. I watched you make your first million and be broken by a girl, I was sitting at your wedding and your babies birth.7
As your baby was born i saw the scene i remembered from so long ago, when you were young and i held you close. 8
I reached into the cot i tried not to shake as i held your baby, his little body pressed against mine, his tiny heartbeat racing. I lay him gently across my lap and stroked his fine black hair looking into his scrunched up face. I thought he was about to cry and i thought my heart would break instead i saw his mouth open up and he smiled at me with his heart and soul. 9
And in that moment a saw a life unfold in A Babies Smile.10
Author notes
I generally am not a very good story writter but i thought that this topic called for it.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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This was almost like reading a poem. The way the word flowed and the way the story came full circle.....fantastic
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this is an amazing piece of writting. loved how you connected the ending with the begining, very clever. keep up the good work, seems you have an amazing talent.
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very heartwarming
Well, if all of your stories are as good as this one, you are an amazing writer. This was just too adorable...I am at loss for words...this was just totally incredible. Excellent job, keep up the great work! -
The imagery here is so warm and loving. It made me feel as if I too was basking in the glow of your pride and love as you described the scene here. You have penned a wonderful depiction of a truly moving and heart stirring scene. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful write.
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awww. this is such an amazing write!!! it is so heart warming!! i love it! keep up the amazing work! you are a really good writer!
kitty xxx
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