Chosen

I want you so close to me 1

So I can feel like it’s meant to be2

To have you here and hold me near3

Makes it all so clear to see.4

Night and day I’ll wait for you5

If that is what I have to do6

In hot and cold I’ll wait to hold7

You in my arms, it’s true.8

Emotions scattered through and through9

It all makes sense when I’m with you10

Together it forms, it all transforms11

Into something it’s supposed to.12

You’re eyes are like the ocean13

I know it’s me they’ve chosen14

They’re dark and deep and hard to keep15

Away from, but I can see they’re open.16

Our hearts seem to beat in time17

As if yours has chosen mine18

They’re slow yet fast and in contrast19

They seem to know a lifetime.20

Joyful smiles and glowing eyes21

I’m beginning to feel the butterflies22

You look though me and you can see23

The real behind disguise.24

I wonder how you do it25

You stole my heart, you culprit26

I love you so your heart echos27

and you and I are starlit. 28

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  • Veritaserum
    February 4, 2009

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    Ahhh...

    Reminds me what it's like to be inlove...

    Nicely done Jess!


  • Cbc
    January 28, 2009

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    i love this its just so... idk but its great. i cant pinpoint any one thing that i like, rather its how it comes together as a whole. keep up the amasing work!


    • Jesslynjello
      February 3, 2009
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      Thanks

      Im glad you like it. most people would say i was a hopeless romantic. haha

      • Cbc
        February 5, 2009
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        aww lol thats ok haha so am i