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In the Kingdom of Anishea, there were three young angels. They had all been given gifts when they were born. The gifts they had received had also determined their names. The girls were children of the Universe, so they were born not to live, but to make the world a better place. There was Buitee, or Belle as most people called her. She had been given beauty. She had long, curly coffee-with-milk hair and skin that reminded you of melted chocolate. Her big, tear drop-shaped eyes matched her skin in color and were surrounded by long, upward-curling eyelashes. Then there was Grace, who was given poise and grace. Her long legs made her look like she was skating when she walked. She had fair, cream colored skin, straight shoulder length black hair, and piercing green eyes. She always held her head high with her shoulders rolled back, and when she moved, she flowed like water in a brook. The next girl, Rennithum, who was called Renee, got rhythm. She did everything as if she was doing it to the thump of a drum. Her bouncy jaw length blond bob and shiny blue eyes matched her excitable, bubbly mood. The three girls were great individually, but together they were astonishing.2

One thing they could all agree was one of their favorite things to do was listen to music. Renee enjoyed the steady, even beat it made and when she listened to it, she would clap or snap along to the beat and move jerkily back and forth. It was fun, but it lacked gracefulness and beauty. Grace liked to spin and move her arms, gracefully; of course, but without rhythm or beauty. When Belle listened to music, she would lift her arms and legs to form, well, beautiful lines. But she was missing grace and rhythm. They went through many years like this; only one third of what they wanted to be when they listened and moved to the music.3

One day, they all got together Renee turned on some music. They all began to do there own thing, but after a while, they looked at each other. Each of them soon realized that the other had what they each personally lacked. Renee held up her arms, “Stop! Look around, guys. Grace, you have poise, but lack Belles beautiful lines and my rhythm. Belle, you have beautiful lines, but lack Graces poise and my rhythm. And I have a good sense of beat, but lack Graces poise and Belles lines.” She looked back and forth between them, and they nodded at her. Although they, too, had realized this, they wanted to know where this was going. “Wellllll, I've just thought of how we can serve our purpose of helping the universe!” She said in a rush. The other two nodded faster, urging her to go on, “We could merge our soles and make...” she paused dramatically, “a, uh, music mover!” she paused before making her announcement, unsure of what to call what they would create; a musical body mover? A body shaker? A music mover? None of them seemed quite right.4

“Yes! Great idea, Renee! But...what should we call what she does? Body moving?” Belle said enthusiastically.5

“Umm...How about a denanse?” Grace suggested.6

“No, too....rigid sounding,” Renee aswered. The other girls exchanged confused looks but shrugged as if to say, “Eh, not a big deal.”7

“How about...dance? It's more musical sounding,” Grace proposed.8

“Yeah, that's good,” the other girls agreed. And so it was decided. The three girls would mix together their souls, talents, and hearts to make girl who would dance.9

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Once they each put a little of themselves into the dancer, along with all the other essential parts to make a human girl, (it could only be an angel if the universe make it, but angels could make the next best things; humans)and once they had created her, they called her Dancer. She was beautiful, graceful, and rhythmic. They played all the music they knew until they ran out, and Dancer danced to every song until it there no more. Belle beckoned Grace and Renee over to her. “Grace, Renee, maybe we should share her? Give a little part of her to people all around the world, so they, too, can be dancers?”11

“Great idea!” Grace and Renee agreed immediatley.12

So to this day, there are many dancer around the world, some of them with a little more Renee, or Grace, or Belle in them. And then theres the one in a million girl or boy, who has the perfectly even mix of all three, and that girl or boy just may be Dancer, visiting for a little bit through another. Grace, Renee, and Belle all learned that they, together, make something even better then each of them individually, and also that if you have something amazing like Dancer, then you should share

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  • StarIlluminated
    February 25
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    Madzoo! This is awesome!! I really really liked it. I liked when you said astonishing, haha I luv dat word . I have one problem though, that your dancer lady person forgot to give a little piece to me (I cannot dance foh my life)

    *KT*

    PS. GUESS WHO?!