Love at First Sight.... (Contest)

All was lost and forgotten1

after I gazed into those eyes.

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kinda mushy and random but hey... there you are. take it or leave it.

A contest entry

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  • Len Shadow
    July 11
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    Aww! <3
    I really loved this! Of was just so adorable!!!


  • Valkyrie silver member
    March 8
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    It's one of those "click" moments, where the world fades away and the eyes lock...it's cute.

    It's also eleven words long. Surprised the contest dude didn't catch that, hee hee. I guess your story overwhelmed him with its romance, and all counting of words was lost and forgotten.


  • Tiger-Lily
    March 8
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    Lol, yes, mushy and even more so for me cause I'm listening to Hanging By a Moment by Lifehouse at this moment. them!

    Ahe. Sorry, fangirl moment. But this, while somewhat bordering to cliche, actually sadly occurs startlingly often in real life. T__T

    - HT


  • neutraltint
    January 29
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    GOOD JOB!

    I love this one! I thought you did a great job. Good luck in my contest!