Bed of Thorns12
Don't let me lie in my bed of thorns, ever.3
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For a 10 word contest
A contest entry
- 10 Word Stories by neutraltint.
175 points, ended January 31, 56 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good story
beginning: 2, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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It sounds like she feels a but afraid...like she's losing hersf to lies. Nicely done!
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It was a good ten words. Kudos to you.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Wow, that certainly brings up vivid mental images fast. What a great choice of (few) words you have here. I especially like the italics at the end; it really makes your point.
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o__O I dunno if I got this in the right context...Is it self=pity, or letting someone go kill themselves when they really shouldn't be undertaking risk/ I suck at implication. T__T
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Omigosh I loved it!!!
I'm glad u liked my poem: Leave -
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hehe, thanks
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Oooh. I like this!!
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Thank you!! I'm really glad you like it
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hahaha I like this one! Good luck in my contest!
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hehe, thanks
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bed of thorns for some reason i really like that lol
what did you mean by it thought?
usually my take is different (:
good job and good luck XD
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Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it
What it is about is depression and asking someone you care about to not let you ruin yourself, or destroy yourself because you are so deep in depression.
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sometimes thats hard to do when the person doesnt trust you or just puts a wall for everyone and doesnt want to be saved
and no matter how much you beg they wont let you in
no matter how many hours you spend on the phone
no matter how many tears you shed
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