LizaTol951
1/23/092
Dear R. Dyiti,3
My story, The Deadly Encounter With My Fate, is about a lawyer that is living in New York City that one day is bitten by a werewolf and later is hunted by two vampires because of an ancient prophecy. At this point, the story is unfinished. Only the beginning and the plot are written and are in editing stages. The word count for this story is 958 words. With this book, I'm hoping to capture the attention of young adults. It could be placed in the following genre categories: crime, fantasy, fiction, horror,and young adult.4
Sypnosis: "I am going to have a visit from a new client tomorrow that are hoping to find a certain person and they need a lawyer to help. That night I hear a loud noice outside and go to investigate. A werewolf bites me and I become one of his kind and a part of an ancient prophecy. My clients appear to be vampires and enemies of werewolves. Will I be able to escape them without knowing what my abilities are and what I'm now a part of?"5
My goals with this project right now are to finish writing it and polishing. In the future, I have a couple of projects in mind that could be listed under adventure, mystery, horror, life, romance, fantasy and young adult.6
Thank you for taking the time and reading my letter. I am willing to submit additional information at your request. My email address is qwe@qwe.com andmy phone number is 111-1111 at which you can contact me at any time.7
Sincerely,8
LizaTol959
Author notes
LizaTol95 http://storywrite.com/story/247784
A contest entry
- Write a Query Letter by Reaver.
610 points, ended January 27, 7 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LizaTol959,
Hi and thanks for entering.
First, Some grammar stuff ↓
horror,and/ horror, and ← You missed a space.
noice/ Noise in paragraph 5
Sypnosis/ Synopsis in paragraph 5
andmy/ and my in 7
Some points about the query↓
*You should enter a targeted date of finish to help with their decision about the book. If it’s to be completed soon, you have a better chance of getting attention.
*You shouldn’t include the word ‘synopsis’ in the query letter as the actual Synopsis is a separate document. The synopsis outlines the entire work, not summarizes it. It leaves nothing to the imagination…and goes into short detail about each twist in the tale. A query only requires a short summary.
*Overall, the actual story sounds like it would make for a wonderful read, once finished. You seem to have a good grip on it and I wish you luck in it and the future of the other stories you have in your mind.
Suggestion↓
*Try personalizing it with such things as how long you have been writing and what your goal is with the project you are trying to sell, and any experience you have in writing.
Thanks for entering,
Rian
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