A girl was born. She lived well. Then she died.
A contest entry
- 10 Word Stories by neutraltint.
175 points, ended January 31, 56 entries
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Simple and depressing? It sounds like she grew up and lived life dieing at a regular age. However when you say girl it contridicts some ideas.
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I'm not sure whether this is a sad tale or a happy tale. Everyone would love to live well, wouldn't they?
Although you say "girl" as if she never grew up, and that would be a sad tale.
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good
it was good but it doesn't make that much sense, but its cute, love it but can't luv it too much. Cute
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haha now that i read it again i actually like it much more...
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Very straight and to the point. Very cute.
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hmm
well, its straight to the point... -
nice job -- ull do well on the day I judge!
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