Last chance.(Short story)

"I'm tired! I'm tired of your lies I'm tired of all your games I'm sick of this!" yelled Casey.1

You just stared at her. You couldn't bring yourself to say anything.2

"I don't want to talk to you ever AGAIN!" she yelled again. 3

She looked as if she was going to snap and cry in your arms.4

"Say something! Jason say SOMETHING!." Now she was standing directly in front of you5

All you could say was "I'm Sorry" you half whispered.6

"That's all you can say!" She yelled7

You held her hand."I didn't mean to hurt you..." 8

She pulled her hand away."But you did and...and there's no going back...You can't undo the past."9

"I know and-"You started but she interrupted you. 10

"Just leave Jason...Just leave."11

You didn't move you just looked at her.12

"Leave Now. What don't you understand I never want to talk to you again!!!"13

You turned around and walked about 3 feet and stopped. You hoped she would tell you to stay and that she forgives you,that she would give you your Last Chance. But she didn't say anything. Nothing. This really was the end. 14

You started walking away then you turned around and whispered "I really do love you...I always will."
She started crying and ran.15

You turned back around and started walking...this time You didn't stop.

Do you like it? If you do should I write a second one about jason and casey

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  • Amicus2K9
    June 30

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    Stuff happens...

    First love....even if not first but, 'soul mate', type...when it falls apart is painful...it is nature's way of letting us know our feeling are important and they tell us things...

    good luck...and thank you...

    amicus