This is a story about four friends named Noone, Someone, Anyone, and Everyone. 1
It was Saturday evening and the four friends had a group project to do. Everyone was supposed to do it but Noone wanted to do it. Since Noone wanted to do it. Since Noone wanted to do it Someone had to help. Everyone thought about doing it but Noone ended up doing it.2
On Monday Everyone was mad because all four of them failed, since Noone did it. Anyone could have done it and Someone should have done it and Everyone would have done it, but Noone did.3
What did you think? Please comment!
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This is a mind bender, very clever. An awesome entry thank you so much for entering and good luck to you in all you do.
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Funny and kinda confusing-love it
This is very good, but it kinda made my mind hurt trying to make sense of it. After a second reading I could understand it though!(Yea, I'm a little slow..)
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love it
love your poem nice. -
You need to fix:
'Since Noone wanted to do it. Since Noone wanted to do it Someone had to help.'
And you need to go back and do a grammer brush up. Commas and the like.
Grammer, what a bugger. 
I hate to join the crowd but this is a confusing write and that's not because of what you were doing with the puns. Thank you for sharing. -
this is cute, it had me a little confused at first but i liked it. it made me smile. great job.
~Arachne -
how did you come up with this? it's amazing, a little confusing and very funny.
awesomeness! -
this is so sweet. almost philosophical. haha great write.
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This one was so totally awesome! I loved it! Te Quiero ~Nick
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wow. that is really special. it's kinda funny though, with the names Noone, Everyone, Someone and Anyone. that's great. i would never have thought of doing that! lol. good job and good luck in the contest.
~Addie~ -
lol this is hillarious i loved it times five at first i couldn't keep up but then after i read it again it wastotally funny!!keep writing your great!!
chrissy -
Whoa. How do you come UP with these things??
This is utterly awesome.
Another seven points for you!
-Tess -
very cute on how you made these words come into figures. i could relate to everyone, b/c i never d my projects. keep up the good work!
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Really good.
I like this. There are very few good humor poems left, and this is a good one. The only problem with it is how much it applies to me. -
This is AWESOME... Honestly... I love confusing things that totally confuzzle me to total confusion... WELL done for confusing me...
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I have heard something like this before and I think it's so cool. It's sort of confusing until you really get the point of it and what it's saying and who is who. I think you could have made some bits slightly clearer but overall a great write, well done
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wow this is awesome......it is really hard to keep up with but once you catch up to it it is really funny! I love this!!!!!! Great job and you must have a lot of time on your hands!!!! Great job though!
Always
XoXo Bridget X Ann XoXo
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