**She was walking through the woods, a mere glimmer in the trees. Fog rose in a dense mist, clouding all from view. The silence broke as a lone arrow whistled through the trees. It pierced the Oak beside her. 1
Whipping around, a shadow pierced the gray fog, coming closer and closer. She began to panic but could not move. A voice echoed in her mind.2
“The end in nigh3
Now is your time to die4
Do not fight5
For this is right6
The end is nigh7
Slowly8
You9
Shall10
DIE!!”11
At the last word, the shadow charged at her. Still, she could not move. It was painful for her to be so helpless. She could not even scream. Everything melted away as a pair of bright, red eyes pierced her only line of sight. It was dark and silent. A chink of an un-sheathing sword sounded sharply. It pierced her torso with cold metal. She cried silently and attempted to rip it out. Falling backwards, she was pinned to the ground in a pool of blood**12
Carly jerked awake and fought for breath. Soon she calmed down and fell back asleep.13
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Author notes
YOU STEAL THIS AND YOU DIE BECAUSE I AM PLANNING ON GETTING IT PUBLISHED AND HAVE BEEN WORKING ON THIS FOR A LONG TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you and have a nice day. *bows*
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Comments
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Sorry to say this, but I've read the others as well as this, and they aren't crazy-good publishing material.
-Vasquine.

