Coffee With A Friend- Vignette

It was 2AM, the sky was still veiled in a deep velvet darkness as we sat in the little, run down diner on 17th st. with some old fifties song playing in the background. The coffee was bitter and strong but I always liked it that way, with a kick that would keep the nights alive and my thoughts turning. No cream or sugar, I wanted to feel the gritty residue lay over my tongue undiluted.1

He sipped from a faded yellow cup and looked up at me with that grin I had come to love over the twenty years that I'd known him. His presence was magic and he knew it. We didn't have to say a word, we each knew the other's mood. Tonight it was troubled but not truly sad and we covered it with friendship. Our laughter played in sarcastic notes across the empty cafe' and the wafer-thin waitress with bloodshot eyes sent a weary look in our direction. 2

'So she took my Cd's but left all the cases for them neatly stacked up in the rack. I have 83 CD covers, not one damn CD' he said. His laughter had a sour edge. It was his fifth break up in all the time I'd known him and each time we'd shared the following night here in this same booth drinking thick, stale brew. 'I can sure pick 'em.' I gave him a sympathetic look and shook my head. This one was not as painful, it seemed, as the one before and the irony was not lost to me. I held his hand across the mucky, little table as the waitress refilled our cups.3

'She was an idiot and didn't deserve you anyway.' I said and recalled that I'd said that same thing several times before to him. The funny thing was that I meant it. Every time. 'One of these days you'll find a person who appreciates how wonderful you are.' God, could I get more cliche'? I was running out of encouraging lines but I knew that being there was the most important thing, not what I said.4

He squeezed my hand. 'How do you put up with me? I'm always crying on your shoulder.'5

I could see the first faint glow of dawn across the horizon.6

'That's what friends are for.'7

Author notes

Sitting in the local diner at 2AM with a good friend.

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  • macandrew
    May 28, 2005
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    very good

    Beautifully written. I use to visit an old 50's diner, it was so much fun.

    Sight, sound, feelings....they were all so very clear in this story.

    thanks,
    John


  • Utok Bulinaw
    May 26, 2005
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    Mary, this really touched my heart. I have been on both sides of the table, had said those lines a lot "How do you put up with me" and "You deserve someone better" or something like that. But what is important is that we are there for them, it is our presence that matters and the feeling that somehow, someone still cares when everybody else doesn't care. Thank you for sharing this here. Hugs, Eris

  • Touchof1der
    May 26, 2005
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    I love it!! I have been on both sides of the table with strikingly similar scenarios as this one and with both male and female friends. There have been times when it didn't really matter that something sad or traumatic happened once we got to talking. Some frineds have a true gift of laughter and you just know before you ever get up from that booth, you will tears in your eyes, but they will be from laughing so hard... not crying. This is great! Another peak into me! You guys are good! Thank you for sharing this with me.
    ♥ Kimberly