Broken.

The Cancer was quick and deadly.

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  • Kevan gold member
    June 9

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    Lol of course I don't see this until now, because I clicked your profile when you messaged me.

    Such a powerful six words though. And this affects so many people. I'm sure everyone who sees this will draw their own image from it, and that's a great thing to accomplish.

    Nice job Natalie
    Alex


  • Dreams of Insanity
    February 21

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    Wow...sad...
    I liked it because of its simplicity and because with just 6 words it just...wow...it took my breath away with the sadness.

  • BurntUmber
    January 22

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    Nice sentence! I just wish you would have entered more . . . nobody read the rules; I wanted more than one! But don't edit it - if you do, it will be DQ'd.