He's rough tonight, and I don’t like it, Tai knows that I don’t like it. His strokes get harder and faster, continuing at such a pace as he is spurred on by my moans of pain, not realising as his pleasure increases.1
“Tai, Tai,” I say, trying to claim his attention.2
“That’s it baby, say my name, oh, god, say my name,” he moans, bucking into my hips with never ending stamina. 3
“Tai, slow down.” I moan.4
There was really nothing sensual about it. Tonight, Tai just wanted to fuck me, end of story. This is why I should never break the best friend boundary, because this is what happens. You just don’t mess with that line, cause this is going to be fucked up when I tell him I want my best friend back.5
“Tai, slow down!” And this time he does. The strokes become even as he now searches for technique, but she’s all I can think about. I close my eyes and I can feel her.6
I feel her fingers, moving with talent across my body. I feel her soft mouth, lovingly caressing every inch of me, with her tongue often caught searching for mine. It’s so wrong, because Tai does love me, as horny as he can get. So for his sake, I open my eyes, but I cant shake her. I’ve never truly felt her touch but I cant shake it’s feeling. I need it too much. So, so much, and snapping back to reality with another series of sharp thrusts I begin to softly cry... 7
heya, well, erm, please do comment, id like to hear opinions...
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you need to be more descriptive. make your readers feel what your characters feel.
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very good job...love the "best friend line" reference...
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very good very good for my mood, keep up the good work
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It was short and sweet.
Nice work
But i got kinda confused in some aspects, one min. the person was saying he, then she?
But i liked it tho.
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Well, for me it signified the transition between her being with the boy but all the while wanting the girl, at least that’s how I saw it when writing, but each to their opinions...
Thankyou very much for your comment,
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it was good nonetheless tho, and you're so very welcome
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FEELING A LITTLE FRESKY ????
mmm this is exactly what I was looking to read in my current mood.
Short, Quick, Simple, Damn fucking sexy and I loved it.
it was good for the body and mind XD
Blair
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why yes actually, thanking you very muchly.
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