Name: Annie Steine A.K.A: Flames1
Age: 15 2
Power: Pyrochenesis3
Crime: Burning down boarding school when she was 84
Age of convict when jailed: 8 ;3 weeks later5
Description: Height: 5’9’’ Weight: 110 lb Race: African 6
Gender: Female Scars, tattoos, and hair: tattoo of fire bird known as the phoenix on her right arm, shoulder length dark brown hair in braids golden nose ring earring7
Eyes: dark brown with flecks of gold and burgundy8
Name: Stacie Gonzales A.K.A: chilly9
Age: 14 10
Power: Arcticcalaboration 11
Crime: Age of convict when jailed: 612
Description: height: 5’4” weight: 116 lb Race: Puerto Rican Gender: female13
Scars tattoos hair: a thin line forming from her right eye to her jawbone and a horizontal line from her cheek to the bridge of her nose14
Black hair with dark purple streaks short and in spikes. Tattoo of the yen yang sign on her back dark purple eyes purple diamond nose stud and choker 15
Running that is all I remember doing is running well I'm tired of running and so I will not. My laughter was all that was heard in the background manical it was, I feel no remorse for what I have done and I showed no mercy on them they did not deserve any. Flames rose higher and higher and even though it seemed that was all I was made of I could still feel the heat of the fire near me against me in me I could feel the fire and I welcomed it’s warmth and heat for fear of the cold the cold that started it all. We were friends best friends practically sisters I found out about my powers first we lived in the arctic her and me, we were always cold. One day we were riding the Canis Maximus a giant type of dog with completely white fur and brown or blue eyes she was riding a female and I a male when we ran over thin ice we fell through despite the agility and swiftness of the dogs. we all fell through the dogs fought to get out and made it then tried to pull us out also but suddenly stopped in mid struggle raised their ears and turned and ran “no” I cried out before sinking deeper into the water. I could see her, her usually pale yellow skin a light blue I tried to reach her before the lack of air caused me to start to black out before I blacked out I saw the form of a completely white beam of light flying toward her and a light of fire flew toward me churning the water and then everything went black. I awoke coughing and struggling against the cold “where am I” I stated more than asked I looked around and found myself in a room filled with unmarked black stonewalls and floor there was no ceiling. Something hot brushed against my shoulder I screamed then quieted finding that the burning lessened then stopped. I looked down and found a phoenix tattooed onto my shoulder and reaching my elbow, its colors were vibrant reds, golds, scarlets, and yellows its eyes a pure black. 16
Now where I come from we know of nature and the way it reacts to us all. I the overly open person I am was always a very cynical person that is to say I didn't take life the way it was given to me I never saw the cup half empty nor half full it was always just half a cup. I guess if I were more like my best friends, I would have been able to take control before it did. I remember when we started in the boarding school she could make it snow or rain or anything whenever she wanted me lets just say I burnt things. Lots and many things trying to control that power I had. One day it took over I was mad no I was beyond the headmistress had just upset me like she really shouldn't’t have. I remember it like it happened only hours and not years ago. “Annie now I know you tried to make an A but the F you earned is more deserving for someone of your stature” she crowed to me cruelly. “My stature?” I spat between clenched teeth 17
“Oh of course you wouldn't’t understand” she said delightedly “you are s–l-o-w you are s-i-m-p-l-e you are a retard”. My eyes hardened and my jaw clenched if possible tighter many people have mistaken my quiet politeness and sudden out breaks for a mental problem, when in actuality it was just me trying to get used to the overwhelmingness of having such a strong power in my hands. “You know I deserve that A just because my view of life and yours differ does not mean that I did not only prove my theory but outsmarted you in the same paper,” I said coldly. “Oh of course you do,” she said getting in my face “that does'nt’t mean I'm giving you the A” her breath held the stench of pork and rodent from the carnavoristic lunch she had eaten only three hours ago. I snapped I shouldn't’t have, really, I shouldn't’t have but really what was I supposed to do. My sight changed as it usually did when my power overwhelmed me. Yet, instead of becoming blurry as it did on occasion, it became sharp, clear, and bright. My skin was quickly heating up instead of the usual dark oak brown; it was steadily becoming darker and darker until it was pitch black. My eyes became a pure hot white. My usually dark brown dreaded locks burst into flame becoming the blue flame of a gasoline fire. The dreadlocks of flame fell on my shoulder and instead of feeling an intense pain; I felt a soft comfort in the heat. My mind became clouded I had no control of what I did in those horrible minutes; it was as if my new fiery instinct took over me. 18
“Would you like to change the grade now?” I inquired with a small tilted smirk appearing on my usually calm face. “G g get away from me st stay away,” she whispered standing up and taking a few hurried steps backward. “I asked you a question” I roared in a furious voice that was not my own. “Noo!” she cried cowering in a corner “leave me alone” her voice quivered slightly I could smell the keen scent of fear. I leapt onto her desk, which immediately burnt into ashes. I lifted my hand and dropped it softly onto her metal throne like chair it slowly melted into a mercury like puddle on the floor. My eyes met her’s they were full of fear and she was shaking slightly. Smiling evilly, I took a step in her direction she backed up into a shelf and knocked over some books. A small giggle passed through my smooth black lips then slowly it turned into a full out cackle as I lunged for her. She made an eep sound and rolled over. She stood, turned then ran for the door. My smirk turned into a full manical smile the chase began. 19
Author notes
umm this sroy is about two teenage girls in a paralell universe
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Please don't waste my time. I can't spend time critiquing someone who didn't follow the rules. That's rude.
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but did you like it its disqualified but did you like it
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Hi, what a blow to be DQ sorry my friend. nice write a little strange but I am sure a lot will like it, you have chosen an Egyptian name for your self, Tefnut daughter of Atum, sister-wife of Shu, goddess of moisture, her name has no certain etymology but has been suggested to be onomatopoeic representation of the sound of spitting.her name is normally represented by a pair of lips, if you want more info let me know. hugs Di
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This is way over the word limit. Disqualified.
