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I was inspired to write this short story by my creative writing teacher Bryenn Hagar. Ms. Hagar had an expierence similar to this except when she was actually in the parking lot she escaped that mans wrath, everything after that was my own doing and a lot of things that she says, thinks, and feels in this story are not really true, I just used her as a character but changed her around.
Creative writing class means a-lot to me and I hope someday I can be as good of a teacher as her.
Also I know this story could have been a bit more elaborate on the climax and stuff, I may go back in and add more when I've got time...you know...it's been really busy.
Thanks soooooooo much for reading, I really appreciate it.
Melissa
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Wow Melissa!! and just to think I brought my application down to Wal-Mart in search of a new job... I think I'll stick with the one I have lmao!!
I could tell you were inspired by a teacher or someone close to you, when you had the character contemplate about being a teacher and whatnot. It was a very interesting story. Very scary if you think about it. There's some weird creeps like that where I work, but thank God I hang around my boss all night. Phew!! lol. GReat job Melissa, keep up the awesome work!
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Well he didn't really have a good reason. However, his reason was because he was partly psychotic and the other reason was he wanted his refund for his photos then and there and Bryenn couldn't give him his refund and it made him more psychotic. Plus she could see the same man in the pictures and he was still drunk. So he was mad, drunk, and crazy all in one. He became her crazy Wal-Mart stalker! lol
thanks for reading,
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woah, a bit long, but very captivating. I would hate for this to actually happen to anyone, however, the ending was quite a nice touch. Great job! -
Very nice stuff! Are you going to write a sequel? I think the story needs continuing. Did you mean to spell it Roby all the wat through? I kept getting confused with Ruby!
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wow, that took forever but it was awesome, i still want to know the reason the guy tried to kill you though.
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Good story I like the good outcome that was at the end of it.I was at wall-mart that other day myself and I thought there was was someone stalking me...there was... I ask my old lady(mom) about it turn out to be my other possible father... that's a long story yours is one to also but I don't have the time you did when you wrote this story to tell you everything so I just
will end this with a Nice Write good Job much love Raneika
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