It's a little short, but hope you like it.1
She watched the fire rage across the land. Everything was burning down in sight. The raging forest fire had taken yet another victim. Naomi’s forest home. She stood in the middle of it all. She saw her own parents being burned to death. A few more victims it had claimed. Rabbits and squirrels ran around trying to take shelter from the fire, but it was everywhere. So they couldn’t get away. The deer in the forest themselves were trying to escape, but the fire got a grip of a buck as it fell to the ground with flames glowing around it. The fire rampaged towards Naomi just then spreading its way towards her. Sparks flew towards her, leaving scars on her. The pain was unbearable, but suddenly it all faded away as eyes flew open. Naomi was alive……it was just a dream. A true night mare of the past.
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Very cool
Thank you.
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