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Picture a black room, filled with nothing. No lights, no sounds, nothing but you. And suddenly, there is your passion, standing right in front of you. It comes towards you slowly, painfully almost. And then, you're laying down together, it caressing your skin softly, giving you goosebumps all over your naked body. You shiver a little.2
Then, your passion starts to kiss your body, leaving no piece of skin untouched. Your lips, your neck, your chest, your stomach...3
And suddenly, you and your passion become one. You share every thought for merely seconds, but you enjoy every minute of the company. You want it to hear your every thought, every dream, and every fantasy. You're more in love with this passion then you've ever been with another...4
Now give your passion a face. This is the face that you want to wake up to every morning for the rest of your life. This is the face that you want to become one with, the face that you hope will love you forever.5
This is what it feels like to make love to this person.6
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This is what I picture it to be...
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Well Done
I liked this piece i tend to go for the 'normal' erotica but this was erotic without being perberse.
Well DOne
XoXo -
good
Beautifully written. I really enjoyed the concept of the story.
Nicely done.
thanks,
John -
Mutual
I've been reading a lot of your pieces and I see us sharing a commonality in what and how we write. It almost felt as if I were writing the piece as I read through it. I could sometimes anticipate what the next line would be about. All in all...Just connected very well with your pieces. I like it! Scroll through some of mine and you may feel the same
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Honest
I like how you put the things in this story. Very uplifting and gives you some hope. I almost killed myself, and found a raw, deep, true love. In the past, I loved people, but they didn't love me back. More often than not, I was being used for great blow jobs. I'm glad I found someone who loves me for me. Not just my sexual ability. -
It's true. That is what it's like. It's better then the dirty erotica...I wish I could write like you.
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Very good. A lovely change of pace from the "normal" erotica.
Lexie
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Beautifully Composed
Very beautiful and poetic. This would be a good story for someone who is down in the dumps over love. It would give them hope anyway.
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