When you walk the beach of time,1
What do you think?2
What do you do?3
What do you wish?4
When your dreams come true,5
What do you think?6
What do you do?7
What do you wish?8
When the whole world explodes,9
What do you think?10
What do you do?11
What do you wish?12
When you fall in love,13
Do you feel all the things above?14
Author notes
I wrote this when I was listening to the Hamster Dance, go figure. And... Crapity Crap! I Accidently posted this as a story!
What did you think? Please comment!
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this was really good! sounds weird i know, but it kind of "provoked" something in me. great write!
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Thanks guys. But I was listening to the Hamster Dance! Well, the remix anyway...
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LOL!!!! I was like awww how sweet the whole way through and then I read your author comment and it made me laugh...you dag!!
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sweet
oh I really like this!
It is very sweet and I love the repitition!
Great work!
best wishes
Alice -
Aww, I like this.. Heh...I would be laughing right now because this is very sweet but...I'm not in the mood. Love is a very precious thing...I hope you find it and it finds you soon. *slight giggle*
~*Meri ♣ -
Um... Not sure if this seems to be inspired by the Hamster Dance in any way. I liked the way this flowed, and I can answer the quesion at the end. I answer it with a yes... I know what it's like to fall in love, unlike those little sluts with their petty weekly crushes... Just rambling.
From Nick
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