Razor Blade

I live my life threw a razor blade,1

To much pain come my way,2

I fucked up once again,3

But that's nothing unfamiliar to you,4

It's all you seem to think i do,5

You seem to think I have no feelings,6

So you just sit and taunt me,7

Little do you know its tearing me apart,8

No one will understand me,9

No one will even care,10

Why should i try anymore?,11

Just throw me away,12

It's all the same.13

It's not like like it hasn't been done before,14

So just do it once more,15

I will never cry,16

You will never see my pain,17

You will never see me hurt inside for that's just a weakened side.18

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  • peluche
    May 24, 2005
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    Again, I love the emotional depth in your pieces. I really feel the pain in this poem. I like your title choices. The flow and rhythm of this was great.