Elemental...Emotional

Towering mountains1

Of sturdy muscle and blood2

Sinew body and iridescent scales3

Majestic creatures4

Full of grace and beauty5

Intelligent6

Terrifying beast7

Full of greed and fury8

Emotional9

Fire or ice 10

Elemental eaters11

Elemental users12

Air or sea13

Current riders14

Current swimmers15

Flying machines16

Fire breathers17

Treasure guardians 18

Dragons19

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  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    February 13

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    woot

    I love dragons and your descriptions of them are wonderful. as a kid, I loved reading about them, or drawing them THey ARE beautiful... and I'd like to believe they did exist. Or still exist

    I'll be keeping this short since I don't want to rant
    Thanks so much for sharing this with SW I enjoyed this ^_^


  • Neomaxizoondweebie
    January 31

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    Ah!

    I'm a dragon lover as well I don't think there are enough stories about them. I love how you portray them, and your language. My favorite two lines were "Towering mountains Of sturdy muscle and blood".

    Very good!


  • Reaver Greeters member
    January 17

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    You made the dragon sound beautiful...as it should be seen. You choose wonderful words to create your work, making it all the more enjoyable to read. Very talented writer.
    Great read!
    Thank you for sharing.
    Rian


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      January 18
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      Alot of people didn't like this one, when posted at another site. *sigh* But I'm glad you liked it
      Thanks again,
      Brooke