Beaches

The beach is a place of peace and of harmony.  The soft smoothe sand creeping beneath your toes. The water flowing like a breath. The sound of the waves crashing on the shore. I lay on my towel and dream of a day when the beach wasn't here. I couldn't think a thought of it. No thing is like a sunset on the beach.

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  • that was so relaxing. I love to go to the beach; during the sunset or sunrise. Its so calming and serene. I like it alot.

  • That was cool. definitely calmed me down.


  • Kagamine Rin
    January 17

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    Very calming and soothing... I may enter this contest. And your description is awesome. I, for one, love the beach. x3. It's peaceful and relaxing.