Vengefull demons

I opened my eyes to the beginning of a new day. It won't be so bad i thought, i'll get to see Luxeon today won't I so get your butt out of bed. I sat up yawned and looked around my room which was organized beyond belief. I pulled my covers back and threw my legs over the side of my bed. I grabbed my bag that had all the stuff I used to get ready in the morning. I walked into the bath- room and looked in the mirror. I'm one of those weird yet pretty girls. I have medium brown hair with bangs that cover my left eye and a blonde streak that went down the right side of my hair. I have dark brown eyes and always wear light red lipstick and dark red eyeshadow.
I brushed out my hair and put on my normal hot pink turtle neck dress and white wicca charm necklace. I applied my usuall red lipstick and eyeshadow. I got out of the bathroom and walked into the kitchen and grabbed two granola bars. I went back into my room and looked for my black and white hot topics backpack my friend torre got me before she moved.
"HEY... Aline" my brother Lexz called. "yeah" i called back just after i found my backpack. He walked into my room. "Mikki's here to pick you up." He reported leaving my room.
"ALINE HURRY UP OR I'M LEAVING" Mikki dared. "Hold on I'm coming" I yelled to an impatient Mikki. Mikki has lightish honey brown hair with light brown eyes and long legs. She always wore purple or dark red lipstick, today was red. I ran down the stairs. "hurry Constance is getting impatient" she rushed. "You're getting pretty impatient yourself aren't you" I smirked scarcastically. "oh shut up and come on, Cody's driving" she said rolling her eyes and pulling me out the door.1

We drove to school and entered. We walked to the gym and sat in the bleachers where Luxeon was. He had powder white hair that went half way down his neck. His hair was messy with bangs that alomst covered his eyes. He had dreamy amber brown eyes and well dreamy.. everything. "hey"he said as I sat next to him. His eyes were distant. The problem was they always were, to tell you the truth it scared me a little. He usually always keeps to himself, but he's kind. Another thing is, is that he's usually more distant around me.2

The bell dismissing us to first period rang. Everyone shuffled out of the bleachers and headed to class. We headed down the Freshman's hall and to our lockers. One of the biggest problems was i couldn't wait to see Luxeon every morning, after I did see him I wanted to stay away from him so I wouldn't stare into his distant eyes.
The rest of the day passed by quick.3

In the morning i did the same routine except instead I had to catch the bus. I almost tripped getting off the bus. I walked to the gym and tripped in the bleachers when I was about to sit down, but Luxeon caught me. I looked around and everyone was laughing except my friends.
The rest of the day was horrible, I was clutzy all day.
I thought it couldn't get any worse but i was wrong.
I was walking to meet Constance to walk home with her but I saw Luxeon talking to two older boys who looked just like him. The only differances were one had short spikey hair and the other's hair was down to his shoulders. I snuck up and hid behind something to eavesdrop. "Luxeon you need to come with us now" one of them urged. "yes listen to your older cousins" demanded the other. "no I'm not going now you can forget it" snapped Luxeon almost emotionally. "don't worry cousin we'll get you to see it our way, but first..." he sighed looking at his brother who just simpley nodded his head. He disapp- eared into the shadows. What! Where'd he go, I thought to myself.
Suddenly he appeared behind me and grabbed me, and dragged me out from where I was hiding. "Look what I found" said the one that had me. "Aline, what are you---" Luxeon started. The one who had shoved me over to him. He wrapped his arms around me and pulled me into his chest. The other two looked at eachother and nodded with wicked grins on their faces. "you were pretty quick to react when the girl's involved" The one with long hair smirked. "NO, don't bring her into this" snapped Luxeon. Luxeon, I thought, I had never seen him like this. I looked up into his usually distant eyes and found worry and anger. "now now cousin---" the other said. "NO, you are NOT bringing her into this AT ALL" he snapped pulling me closer into his chest. "face it cousin she was in this the moment we caught her" smirked the one with longer hair. "I don't care, get your revenge another way, not through her" he growled. "I'd be carefull" the one with spikey hair said admiring me. "and why is that" barked Luxeon. "she's pretty someone might take her" he said again still admiring me. "What's going on?" I asked confused, "What revenge?" "heh a curious girl aren't ya" one of them laughed.

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ALine is 15, her brother is 19, Luxeon is 16, the long haired dude (Gnomomaru) is 17, the short spikey haired dude (Oronuw) is 17. Oh and I'm not done.^^

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  • Len Shadow
    February 24

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    There were a few spelling errors and grammar error. Always remember to make a new paragraph when someone speaks. Other than that, it was adicting. Great job! ^^