Leviathan.

Even through the end of things,
I still can't let it go.
How it felt to have a sliver of hope,
but all of that crushed within two minutes,
and just one word.
No.
I all started, with a smile,
and devious flirtations.
I lead you on,
my own misdoings.
I wanted to share my world,
my way of visioning things,
with you--and only you.
No.
One word, and my heart,
like a dumbwaiter,
plummets down, deep into acidic fluids,
trapped in food stained walls.
I've never felt this overwhelmed in my life,
smiling with the sun, every single day,
and it's hard for me,
to hear you say that word...
no.
I won't cry, as I've promised myself,
and don't worry about me,
I'm still here, right where you left me.

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  • Wow agian you have a gift for imagry it creates a vivid picture in my mind and doesnt allow you to stop reading


  • Savage
    January 23
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    Incredible.