I was falling. I was falling fast and head first. I was surrounded by darkness. There seemed to be no escape. I had been falling for a long, long time. But then, the darkness cleared. I touched ground. And without thinking, I started walking. And to this day, I'm still walking, and I've never looked back...1
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Just something small that popped into my head this morning. Seemed to summerise my life completely. Short but sweet 
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Nice
Hey, this like, reminded of how someone is having a bad day, but then for some reason, it brightens up.
It was short, but indeed, sweet
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AWW this is short and to the point also very heartfelt and sad I look forward to reading more of your work and keep up the good writes and hope you are okay in life<3
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woah! really deep and I understood it perfectly. It kinda reminded me of a poem. It's cool that you know how to not look back... sometimes its so hard not to.
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hmmm scary but truth at the same time, nice story
anyway, hope you dont carry on falling and you can continue walking...l8az love ya sky xxxx
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This is very good and it is so true. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing with all of us.
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hey dude this is really good i didnt really get it at first cause im dumb like that and then i read it again and actually it very umm well i cant think of the word lol. Its really good and its all totally true and somthing that i should do but i cant. well done again
love ceri
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I can relate to this. Yesterday was my big day where I realized how much I've changed and stuff. My life still has it's ups and downs, but last year, I went through some pretty bad things.
This was great. It was very touching.
Great write hun!
Always and Forever,
~Kendal
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Awwww!
(I just said it cuz everyone else did....)
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I like this, and if this sumerizes your live then you've got it figured out. It's not about finding a comfortable place to stand, it's about walking and not looking back. Well said! -
awww, this is cute. keep up the amazingly amazing work hun. see ya later!
kitty xx -
Aww this is nice, kinda positive i thinkies
Thanx for sharing X
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